From 991bb6a695a292e7cc61d2e8fcb5ccdffb7335d8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Martin Schanzenbach <schanzen@gnunet.org>
Date: Thu, 5 May 2022 15:46:40 +0200
Subject: clarify IANA number ranges

---
 draft-schanzen-gns.xml | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
index 1ab17d4..d47ae9c 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@
      </t>
      <t>
        Zone contents are encrypted and signed
-       before being published in a distributed key-value storage (<xref target="publish"/>)
+       before being published in a key-value storage (<xref target="publish"/>)
        as illustrated in <xref target="figure_arch_publish"/>.
        In this process, unique zone identification is hidden from the network
        through the use of key blinding.
@@ -931,8 +931,8 @@ zTLD[126..129].zTLD[63..125].zTLD[0..62]
          type as defined in <xref target="RFC1035" /> or any of the
          complementary standardized DNS resource record types. This value must be
          stored in network byte order. Note that values
-         below 2^16 are reserved for allocation via IANA <xref target="RFC6895" />,
-         while values above 2^16 are allocated by the
+         below 2^16 are reserved for 16-bit DNS Resorce Record types allocated by IANA <xref target="RFC6895" />.
+         Values above 2^16 are allocated by the
          GNUnet Assigned Numbers Authority <xref target="GANA" />.
        </dd>
        <dt>DATA</dt>
@@ -1658,8 +1658,8 @@ S-Decrypt(zk,label,expiration,ciphertext):
          <dd>
            the 16-bit protocol number, e.g. 6 for TCP.
            Note that values
-           below 2^8 are reserved for allocation via IANA <xref target="RFC5237" />,
-           while values above 2^8 are allocated by the
+           below 2^8 are reserved for 8-bit Internet Protocol numbers allocated by IANA <xref target="RFC5237" />.
+           Values above 2^8 are allocated by the
            GNUnet Assigned Numbers Authority <xref target="GANA" />.
            In network byte order.
          </dd>
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