From b78146658710310370db633eff0b421378f0c67a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Christian Grothoff Date: Mon, 13 Mar 2017 14:54:16 +0100 Subject: revising index and citizen's pages based on feedback from Marcello and Sva --- citizens.html.j2 | 72 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------ index.html.j2 | 27 ++++++++++----------- merchants.html.j2 | 4 ++-- 3 files changed, 56 insertions(+), 47 deletions(-) diff --git a/citizens.html.j2 b/citizens.html.j2 index 024bdc41..af3f0e6c 100644 --- a/citizens.html.j2 +++ b/citizens.html.j2 @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
-

{{ _("Security") }}

+

{{ _("Secure") }}

{{ _("Taler uses modern cryptography, ensuring that there is no counterfeit. Your digital wallet is safer @@ -34,20 +34,20 @@

-

{{ _("Privacy") }}

+

{{ _("Private") }}

-

{{ _("Your transactions are private, neither the exchange - nor merchant needs to learn your identity. There is - no need to give out credit card numbers or other - sensitive information. The merchant will only be - able to do exactly the transaction you agreed to.") - }}

+

{{ _("Your transactions are private, neither the payment + service provider nor merchant needs to learn your + identity. There is no need to give out credit card + numbers or other sensitive information. The merchant + will only be able to do exactly the transaction you + agreed to.") }}

-

{{ _("Convenience") }}

+

{{ _("Convenient") }}

{{ _("You will be able to withdraw money to replenish the digital coins in your wallet using your credit card @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@

-

{{ _("Stability") }}

+

{{ _("Stable") }}

{{ _("Coins in your digital wallet will be of the same denomination as the cash in your physical wallet. @@ -104,30 +104,40 @@

{{ _("Customers interact with the Taler system using the Taler wallet:") }}

+
    -
  • {{ _("To withdraw electronic coins, the customer transfers funds - from his bank account to the Taler exchange. The wire - transfer subject must match a code generated by the customer's - wallet. After the wire transfer is complete, the wallet will - automatically withdraw the coins.") }}
    • - -
  • {{ _("To spend electronic coins, a merchant must cause the wallet - to display a proposal and ask for one-click confirmation. - Payment is then instant. - Transaction histories and digitally signed contracts can be - preserved by the wallet.") }}
    • + +
  • {{ _("To withdraw electronic coins, the customer + transfers funds from his bank account to the Taler + payment service provider (the exchange). The wire + transfer subject must match a code identifying the + customer's wallet. After the wire transfer is + complete, the wallet will automatically withdraw the + coins from the exchange.") }}
    • + +
  • {{ _("To spend electronic coins, a merchant must + cause the wallet to display a proposal for some + purchase. The wallet will ask the customer for + one-click confirmation. Payment is then instant. + Transaction histories and digitally signed contracts + can be preserved by the wallet.") }}
  • {{ _("The customer can use the wallet to review his - balance. The wallet can contain different currencies, - and may be shared across devices. Customers can make - backups of the wallet to secure its contents against - hardware failures.") }}
    • -
-
-
- customer perspective -
+ balance. The wallet can contain different + currencies, and may be shared across + devices. Customers can make backups of the wallet to + secure its contents against hardware failures.") + }} + +
- +
+ customer perspective +
+ + + {% endblock body_content %} diff --git a/index.html.j2 b/index.html.j2 index aa171dce..293a5d9d 100644 --- a/index.html.j2 +++ b/index.html.j2 @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
-

{{ _("Independent One-Click Payments!") }}

+

{{ _("One-Click Cash Payments!") }}

{% trans %} Taler is an electronic payment system under @@ -40,18 +40,17 @@

{% trans %} - Taler does not introduce a new currency with - fluctuation risks, and instead uses a digital - wallet holding coins in reserve. Taler's - cryptographic coins correspond to existing - currencies, such as US Dollars, Euros or even - Bitcoins. + Taler does not introduce a new currency. Taler + uses a digital wallet storing coins and payment service + providers with escrow accounts in existing currencies. + Thus, Taler's cryptographic coins correspond to existing + currencies, such as US Dollars, Euros or even Bitcoins. {% endtrans %}

-

{{ _("Security-focused") }}

+

{{ _("Secure") }}

{% trans %} @@ -70,7 +69,7 @@

{% trans %} - When using Taler, merchants cannot hide their income from tax + When using Taler, merchant's revenue is transparent for tax collection authorities. Unlike cash and most digital currencies, Taler helps prevent black markets. Taler is not suitable for illegal activities. @@ -79,7 +78,7 @@

-

{{ _("Privacy-friendly") }}

+

{{ _("Private") }}

{% trans %} When you pay with Taler, your identity does not @@ -118,7 +117,7 @@ on their device. Before the first payment, the wallet's balance must be charged in the desired currency by some other means of payment.

Once the wallet is charged, payments on websites take only one click, - are never falsely rejected by fraud detection and do not post any risk + are never falsely rejected by fraud detection and do not pose any risk of phishing or identity theft.

{% endtrans %}
@@ -126,10 +125,10 @@

{{ _("Receiving payments with Taler") }}

{% trans %}

To receive Taler payments, a merchant needs a bank account - in the desired currency. We provide - SDKs in various languages to makes the integration painless. + in the desired currency. We provide supporting software + in various programming languages to make the integration painless. The merchant's backend for Taler transaction processing can run - on the merchant's premises or hosted.

+ on the merchant's premises or be hosted by a third party.

{% endtrans %} diff --git a/merchants.html.j2 b/merchants.html.j2 index f5c9b422..e2b17947 100644 --- a/merchants.html.j2 +++ b/merchants.html.j2 @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
-

{{ _("Free Software") }}

+

{{ _("Free") }}

{{ _("Taler is free software, and you can use the liberally-licensed reference code as a starting @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@

-

{{ _("Low Fees") }}

+

{{ _("Cheap") }}

{{ _("Taler is designed to minimize the work the exchange needs to perform. Combined with Taler's strong -- cgit v1.2.3