taler-docs

commit d46efa10d3a790980d842d6eef6377a77a886239
parent f2d823a3c33b481c1b8f813d6f3caa31e1ddc926
Author: Florian Dold <florian@dold.me>
Date:   Mon, 20 Jul 2026 17:43:14 +0200

minor changes to DD97

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design-documents/097-project-sesame.rst
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diff --git a/design-documents/097-project-sesame.rst b/design-documents/097-project-sesame.rst
@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@ DD 97: Project Sesame — Anonymous Access Control
 Summary
 =======
 
-This design document describes how Taler eco-system can be used
-to enable anonymous access to different systems.
+This design document describes how the Taler eco-system can be used
+to enable anonymous access to different physical access control systems.
 A wallet obtains blind-signed
-tokens — one per *access group* — from the merchant backend via a new
+tokens (one per *access group*) from the merchant backend via a new
 *fountain* credential. To open a door, the wallet reads a challenge
 from the (offline) lock, instantiates an order from the door's
 template, pays with its group token (consuming it and receiving a
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ blocks for a privacy-preserving alternative:
   `DD 68 <068-tokens-roadmap.html>`__).
 * *Templates* allow order creation without merchant-side frontend
   logic.
-* *OTP devices* logic allows generation of confirmation
+* *OTP devices* allow generation of confirmation
   (``pos_confirmation``) for successful payments, which an offline
   device (door) can verify.