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commit 33b7c4306e5bc8ea695b7e265136c9f42bfc9fe0
parent 36a567839e0609e432392676dd99d8c5342fdce0
Author: Christian Grothoff <christian@grothoff.org>
Date:   Fri, 30 Jun 2023 22:33:06 +0200

move section title storage key to where discussion of storage key begins

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draft-schanzen-gns.xml
 | 
12
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1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -1785,10 +1785,12 @@ GET(key) -> block
        remote storage.
      </t>
      <t>
-       Resource records are grouped by their respective labels,
+       All resource records from the same zone sharing the same label are
        encrypted and published together in a single records block
-       (RRBLOCK) in the storage under a storage key q as illustrated in <xref target="figure_storage_publish"/>.
-       The implementation <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> use the PUT storage procedure in order to update the zone contents accordingly.
+       (RRBLOCK) in the remote storage under a key q as illustrated
+       in <xref target="figure_storage_publish"/>.
+       The implementation <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> use the PUT storage procedure
+       to update the zone contents accordingly.
      </t>
      <figure anchor="figure_storage_publish" title="Management and publication of local zones in the distributed storage.">
        <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[
@@ -1817,6 +1819,8 @@ GET(key) -> block
                      +---------+               |
          ]]></artwork>
      </figure>
+     <section anchor="blinding" numbered="true" toc="default">
+       <name>The Storage Key</name>
      <t>
        The storage key is derived from the zone key and the respective
        label of the contained records.
@@ -1854,8 +1858,6 @@ GET(key) -> block
            +------+        +-------------+
          ]]></artwork>
      </figure>
-     <section anchor="blinding" numbered="true" toc="default">
-       <name>The Storage Key</name>
        <t>
          Given a label, the storage key q is derived as follows:
        </t>