commit 3f7b6118a499ac2d33211065fc90872e6bde02f9
parent 7f1a1bd57eab3898975590e205699a40f15b2e28
Author: Christian Grothoff <christian@grothoff.org>
Date: Fri, 30 Jun 2023 17:05:29 +0200
trying to improve English / clarity
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -115,8 +115,8 @@
<t>
This specification describes the GNU Name System (GNS), a
censorship-resistant, privacy-preserving and decentralized
- domain name resolution protocol. GNS can bind names to any
- kind of cryptographically secured token, enabling it to double
+ domain name resolution protocol. GNS cryptographically secures
+ the binding of names to arbitrary tokens, enabling it to double
in some respects as an alternative to some of today’s public
key infrastructures.
</t>
@@ -129,7 +129,10 @@
root zone. In the GNS reference implementation, users can
autonomously and freely delegate control of names to zones
through their local configurations.
- In this model, users are expected to manage their local configurations, so as to avoid any confusion as to how names are resolved.
+ GNS expects each user to be in control of their setup.
+ By following <xref target="namespace_ambiguity" /> guidelines,
+ users should manage to avoid any confusion as to how names are
+ resolved.
</t>
<t>
Name resolution and zone dissemination is based on the
@@ -3799,14 +3802,14 @@ Base32GNS-Decode:
</section>
<section>
<name>Record sets</name>
-
+
<t>
The test vectors include record sets with a variety
of record types and flags for both PKEY and EDKEY zones.
This includes labels with UTF-8 characters to demonstrate
internationalized labels.
</t>
- <t><strong>(1) PKEY zone with ASCII label and one delegation record</strong></t>
+ <t><strong>(1) PKEY zone with ASCII label and one delegation record</strong></t>
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<![CDATA[
Zone private key (d, big-endian):
@@ -3911,7 +3914,7 @@ ae a4 39 91 48 d5 0c ff
]]>
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- <t><strong>(2) PKEY zone with UTF-8 label and three records</strong></t>
+ <t><strong>(2) PKEY zone with UTF-8 label and three records</strong></t>
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