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commit c2515c50ce650c24f14a62d1b567d950d3f0d58b
parent fb22250567444ec417d15053827e47f239c2207a
Author: Christian Grothoff <christian@grothoff.org>
Date:   Fri, 30 Jun 2023 22:17:50 +0200

improve English

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draft-schanzen-gns.xml
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1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -1734,27 +1734,27 @@ S-Decrypt(zk,label,expiration,ciphertext):
        <dl>
          <dt>PROTO</dt>
          <dd>
-           the 16-bit protocol number, e.g. 6 for TCP.
-           Note that values
-           below 2^8 are reserved for 8-bit Internet Protocol numbers allocated by IANA <xref target="RFC5237" />.
+           the 16-bit protocol number stored in network byte order.
+           Values
+           below 2^8 are reserved for 8-bit Internet Protocol numbers allocated by IANA <xref target="RFC5237" />
+           (e.g. 6 for TCP).
            Values above 2^8 are allocated by the
            GANA "Overlay Protocols" registry <xref target="GANA" />.
-           In network byte order.
          </dd>
          <dt>SVC</dt>
          <dd>
-           the 16-bit service value of the boxed record. In case of
+           the 16-bit service value of the boxed record stored in network byte order. In case of
            TCP and UDP it is the port number.
-           In network byte order.
          </dd>
          <dt>TYPE</dt>
          <dd>
-           is the 32-bit record type of the boxed record. In network byte order.
+           is the 32-bit record type of the boxed record stored in network byte order.
          </dd>
          <dt>RECORD DATA</dt>
          <dd>
            is a variable length field containing the "DATA" format of TYPE as
-           defined for the respective TYPE in DNS.
+           defined for the respective TYPE.  Thus, for TYPE values below 2^16, the
+           format is the same as the respective record type's binary format in DNS.
          </dd>
        </dl>
      </section>