lsd0001

commit fd37205cd8d3e270bda8b5f98a269e920eb7bd47
parent bf2ead7076a2cb86fede4c75a782ed589fc81dd8
Author: Schanzenbach, Martin <mschanzenbach@posteo.de>
Date:   Fri,  4 Oct 2019 11:21:02 +0200

Merge branch 'master' of ssh://gnunet.org/lsd0001

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draft-schanzen-gns.xml
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1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -82,8 +82,8 @@
    <name>Zones</name>
    <t>
     A zone in GNS is defined by a public/private ECC key pair (d,zk),
-    where B is the generator of a group or subgroup, d is the private key and
-    zk the corresponding public key
+    where d is the private key and
+    zk the corresponding public key.
     GNS uses the Ed25519 EC parameters as defined in <xref target="RFC8032" />.
     GNS combines the EC parameters of Ed25519 with the ECDSA scheme
     defined in <xref target="RFC6979" /> in order to achieve zone privacy.
@@ -186,10 +186,10 @@
 </section>
 <section anchor="gnsrecords_pkey" numbered="true" toc="default">
   <name>PKEY</name>
-  <t>In GNS, a delegation of a label to a zone is represented througha PKEY
+  <t>In GNS, a delegation of a label to a zone is represented through a PKEY
     record. A PKEY resource record contains the public key of the zone to
     delegate to. A PKEY record MUST be the only record under a label. No other
-    labels are allows. The a PKEY DATA entry has the following format:</t>
+    records are allowed. The a PKEY DATA entry has the following format:</t>
   <figure anchor="figure_pkeyrecord">
     <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[
       0     8     16    24    32    40    48    56
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@
         </dd>
         <dt>RECORD</dt>
         <dd>
-          The boxed record in a format as defined in 
+          The boxed record in a format as defined in
           <xref target="rrecords_wire" />.
         </dd>
       </dl>
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@
         <dd>
           The resource records block expiration time. This is the expiration
           time of the resource record contained within this block with the
-          smallest expiration time. 
+          smallest expiration time.
           If a records block includes shadow records, then the *maximum*
           expiration time of all shadow records with matching type and the
           expiration times of the non-shadow records is considered.