lsd0003

commit 002e76c2851086b1e557d3a22831013add030fc4
parent d503f8859d827356c9bd5e50cbaeb1f550ed5f4a
Author: Elias Summermatter <elias.summermatter@seccom.ch>
Date:   Sun, 13 Jun 2021 22:28:17 +0200

Corrections

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draft-summermatter-set-union.xml
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1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/draft-summermatter-set-union.xml b/draft-summermatter-set-union.xml
@@ -1866,24 +1866,22 @@ hashSum |    0x0101   |    0x5151   |    0x5050   |    0x0000   |
                         <dd>
                             is a 64-bit unsigned integer that is defined by the size of the set the SE is
                         </dd>
-                        <!-- CORRECT START -->
                         <dt>SE-SLICES</dt>
                         <dd>
                             <t>
-                                are variable numbers of slices in an array. A single slice can contain one or more Strata Estimators which
+                                are variable numbers of slices in an array. A slice can contain one or more Strata Estimators which
                                 contain multiple IBFs as described in IBF-SLICES in <xref target="messages_ibf_structure" format="default"/>.
                                 A SE slice can contain one to eight Strata Estimators which contain 32 (Defined as Constant SE_STRATA_COUNT) IBFs. Every IBF in
                                 a SE contains 79 Buckets.
                             </t>
                             <t>
-                                The different SEs are build as in detail described as in section <xref target="performance_multi_se" format="default"/>.
+                                The different SEs are built as in detail described in <xref target="performance_multi_se" format="default"/>.
                                 Simply put, the IBFs in each SE are serialized as described in <xref target="messages_ibf_structure" format="default"/> starting with the highest stratum.
                                 Then the created SEs are appended one after the other starting with the SE that was created with a salt of zero.
 
                             </t>
                         </dd>
                     </dl>
-                    <!-- CORRECT END -->
                     <figure anchor="figure_se_slice">
                         <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[
                              SE-SLICE
@@ -1910,13 +1908,11 @@ hashSum |    0x0101   |    0x5151   |    0x5050   |    0x0000   |
 
               <section anchor="messages_sec_description" numbered="true" toc="default">
                 <name>Description</name>
-                  <!-- CORRECT START -->
                 <t>
-                  The Strata estimator can be compressed (the SE-Slices are compressed the header stays uncompressed) with gzip as
+                  The Strata Estimator can be compressed (the SE-Slices are compressed, the header stays uncompressed) with gzip as
                   described in <xref target="RFC1951"/> to improve performance. This can be recognized
                   by the different message type number from <xref target="gana" format="title" />.
                 </t>
-                  <!-- CORRECT END -->
                 <t>
                   Since the content of the message is the same as the uncompressed Strata Estimator, the details
                   are not repeated here. For details see section <xref target="messages_se" format="counter" />.