commit 4b67341d57bf93d247faf9ff173e19cf0a867962
parent efa81740d4fe6ba46af3ae3f55dbe811efec49a3
Author: Elias Summermatter <elias.summermatter@seccom.ch>
Date: Mon, 21 Dec 2020 15:51:41 +0100
Improved some form
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/draft-summermatter-set-union.xml b/draft-summermatter-set-union.xml
@@ -613,14 +613,14 @@
<name>Description</name>
<t>
The Element message contains a element that is synced in the <xref target="modeofoperation_individual-elements" format="title" />
- to transmit a complete element between the peers.
+ and transmits a full element between the peers.
</t>
<t>
- This message is sent in the state <strong>Active Decoding</strong> and in the <strong>Passive Decoding</strong>
+ This message is sent in the state <strong>Active Decoding</strong> and <strong>Passive Decoding</strong>
as answer to an <em><xref target="messages_demand" format="title" /></em> message from the remote peer.
The Element message can also be received in the <strong>Finish Closing</strong> or <strong>Finish Waiting</strong>
state after receiving a <em><xref target="messages_done" format="title" /></em> message from the remote peer, in this
- case the client changes to the <strong>Finished</strong> state as soon as all Element messages are received.
+ case the client changes to the <strong>Finished</strong> state as soon as all demands for elements have been satisfied.
</t>
</section>
<section anchor="messages_elements_structure" numbered="true" toc="default">
