commit 174c87977bfc0940208b872160519d4698d47511
parent a4d1d012678e339cc7b5d29386ea20aa3790444b
Author: Martin Schanzenbach <schanzen@gnunet.org>
Date: Sun, 14 Jul 2024 09:44:41 +0200
no bcp in underlay
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
@@ -582,7 +582,7 @@ Connectivity | |Underlay| |Underlay| | Underlay | ...
<section anchor="underlay" numbered="true" toc="default">
<name>Underlay</name>
<t>
- A peer <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> implement one or more underlay
+ A peer <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> support one or more underlay
protocols.
Peers supporting multiple underlays effectively
create a bridge between different networks. How peers are
@@ -595,7 +595,7 @@ Connectivity | |Underlay| |Underlay| | Underlay | ...
<em>peers</em> in the DHT overlay. This standardized format
is the <em>HELLO Block</em> (described in <xref
target="hello_block"/>), which contains sets of addresses. If
- the address is a URI, it <bcp14>MAY</bcp14> indicate which
+ the address is a URI, it may indicate which
underlay understands the respective <em>address</em>.
</t>
<!--
@@ -690,8 +690,8 @@ Connectivity | |Underlay| |Underlay| | Underlay | ...
<tt>M</tt> to a peer <tt>P</tt>. Sending messages is expected
to be done on a best-effort basis, thus the underlay does not
have to guarantee delivery or message ordering. If the underlay
- implements flow- or congestion-control, it <bcp14>MAY</bcp14>
- also discard messages to limit its queue size.
+ implements flow- or congestion-control, it may
+ discard messages to limit its queue size.
</dd>
<dt>
<tt>ESTIMATE_NETWORK_SIZE() -> L2NSE</tt>
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ Connectivity | |Underlay| |Underlay| | Underlay | ...
was added for our local peer and that henceforth the peer
may be reachable under this address. This information is
used to advertise connectivity information about the local
- peer to other peers. <tt>A</tt> <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> be an
+ peer to other peers. <tt>A</tt> is an
address suitable for inclusion in a <tt>HELLO</tt> payload
<xref target="hello_block"/>.
</dd>
@@ -756,8 +756,7 @@ Connectivity | |Underlay| |Underlay| | Underlay | ...
<dd>
This underlay signal indicates that an address <tt>A</tt>
was removed from the set of addresses the local peer is
- possibly reachable under. Addresses <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> have
- been added before they may be deleted. The signal is used
+ possibly reachable under. The signal is used
to stop advertising this address to other peers.
</dd>
<dt>
