commit 878600d114106c231edca81dca57ab22784c0db1
parent e342a862ff28d017b3e31b1aa280052d4e0404f4
Author: Christian Grothoff <grothoff@gnunet.org>
Date: Fri, 12 Jul 2024 15:34:10 +0200
simplify English
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
@@ -1113,14 +1113,14 @@ BEGIN
configurable and <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> be at least 128 * 10<sup>3</sup>.
</t>
<t>
- For each entry in the pending table, the DHT <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> track
- not only the query key and the origin, but also the
- extended query, requested block type and flags, and the
- result filter. If the query did not provide
- a result filter, a fresh result filter
- <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> still be created to filter duplicate replies.
- Details of how a result filter works depend on the
- type, as described in <xref target="block_functions"/>.
+ For each entry in the pending table, the DHT
+ <bcp14>MUST</bcp14> track the query key, the peer identity
+ of the previous hop, the extended query, requested block type,
+ flags, and the result filter. If the query did not provide
+ a result filter, a fresh result filter <bcp14>MUST</bcp14>
+ still be created to filter duplicate replies. Details of
+ how a result filter works depend on the type, as described
+ in <xref target="block_functions"/>.
</t>
<t>
When a second query from the same origin for the
