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1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
index ed50901..35cbd49 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -344,14 +344,14 @@
            Global names through the concept of zone top-level
            domains (zTLDs): As zones can be uniquely identified by their zone key
            and are statistically unique, zTLDs are globally unique mappings to zones.
-           Consequently, GNS names with a zTLD suffix are also globally unique.
-           Global GNS names are not human-readable.
+           Consequently, GNS domain names with a zTLD suffix are also globally unique.
+           Names with zTLDs names are not human-readable.
          </li>
          <li>
            Memorable petnames for zones:
-           Users can configure local petnames for zones.
-           The petnames serve as zTLD monikers in order to support human-readable
-           names.
+           Users can configure local, human-readable references to zones.
+           Such petnames serve as zTLD monikers in order to support
+           human-readable domain names.
            The petnames may also be published in order to delegate namespaces
            of zones.
          </li>