1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
index edadc21..1f77330 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -703,11 +703,11 @@ zTLD[126..129].zTLD[63..125].zTLD[0..62]
        </t>
        <dl>
          <dt>Z</dt>
-         <dd>The number of PoWs required is fixed at 32.</dd>
+         <dd>The number of PoWs that are required. Its value is fixed at 32.</dd>
          <dt>D</dt>
-         <dd>The minimum average difficulty is fixed at 22.</dd>
+         <dd>The minimum average difficulty. Its value is fixed at 22.</dd>
          <dt>EPOCH</dt>
-         <dd>A single epoch is fixed at 365 days.</dd>
+         <dd>A single epoch. Its value is fixed at 365 days in microseconds.</dd>
        </dl>
        <t>
          The revocation message wire format is illustrated in
@@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ zTLD[126..129].zTLD[63..125].zTLD[0..62]
          <dt>TTL</dt>
          <dd>
            denotes the relative 64-bit time to live of the record in
-           microseconds also in network byte order.
+           microseconds in network byte order.
            The field <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> be set to EPOCH * 1.1.
            Given an average number of leading zeros D', then the field value
            <bcp14>MAY</bcp14> be increased up to (D'-D) * EPOCH * 1.1.