revise citizen page bottom

1 files changed, 29 insertions, 45 deletions

diff --git a/locale/en/LC_MESSAGES/messages.po b/locale/en/LC_MESSAGES/messages.po
index 0808de5c..07bf7c60 100644
--- a/locale/en/LC_MESSAGES/messages.po
+++ b/locale/en/LC_MESSAGES/messages.po
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ msgid ""
 msgstr ""
 "Project-Id-Version: PROJECT VERSION\n"
 "Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: EMAIL@ADDRESS\n"
-"POT-Creation-Date: 2017-03-06 23:06+0100\n"
+"POT-Creation-Date: 2017-03-06 23:50+0100\n"
 "PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n"
 "Last-Translator: FULL NAME <EMAIL@ADDRESS>\n"
 "Language: en\n"
@@ -207,63 +207,44 @@ msgid ""
 msgstr ""
 
 #: citizens.html.j2:103
-msgid "Taler as seen by customers"
+msgid "The Taler Wallet for customers"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: citizens.html.j2:105
 msgid ""
-"Customers interact with the Taler system mostly using\n"
-"             a free wallet implementation, which may be an\n"
-"             extension or plugin to their browser or a custom\n"
-"             application on their computer(s).  Typical steps\n"
-"             performed by customers are: "
+"Customers interact with the Taler system using\n"
+"             the Taler wallet:"
 msgstr ""
 
-#: citizens.html.j2:114
-msgid ""
-"The customer selects an exchange (i.e. by\n"
-"                  visiting the respective website or selecting\n"
-"                  from a list of exchanges in the application) and\n"
-"                  asks the wallet to create bank transfer\n"
-"                  instructions to withdraw a certain amount of\n"
-"                  electronic cash.  The bank transfer instructions\n"
-"                  will contain an access code that must be\n"
-"                  included in the subject of the transaction, as\n"
-"                  well as the wire details for the exchange (i.e.\n"
-"                  a SEPA account number)."
-msgstr ""
-
-#: citizens.html.j2:125
+#: citizens.html.j2:108
 msgid ""
-"The customer then instructs his <b>bank</b> to\n"
-"                   transfer funds from his account to the Taler\n"
-"                   exchange using these instructions provided by\n"
-"                   the wallet (top left)."
+"To <b>withdraw</b> electronic coins, the customer transfers funds\n"
+"                  from his bank account to the Taler exchange.  The wire\n"
+"                  transfer subject must match a code generated by the "
+"customer's\n"
+"                  wallet. After the wire transfer is complete, the wallet"
+" will\n"
+"                  automatically withdraw the coins."
 msgstr ""
 
-#: citizens.html.j2:130
+#: citizens.html.j2:114
 msgid ""
-"Once the funds have arrived, the wallet will\n"
-"                   automatically withdraw the electronic coins.\n"
-"                   The customer can use the wallet to review his\n"
-"                   remaining balance at any time. He can also make\n"
-"                   backups to secure his digital coins against\n"
-"                   hardware failures."
+"To <b>spend</b> electronic coins, a merchant must cause the wallet\n"
+"                  to display a proposal and ask for one-click "
+"confirmation.\n"
+"                  Payment is then instant.\n"
+"                  Transaction histories and digitally signed contracts "
+"can be\n"
+"                  preserved by the wallet."
 msgstr ""
 
-#: citizens.html.j2:137
+#: citizens.html.j2:120
 msgid ""
-"When visiting a merchant that supports Taler,\n"
-"                   an additional payment option for Taler is\n"
-"                   enabled in the checkout system.  If the\n"
-"                   customer selects payments via Taler, the wallet\n"
-"                   displays the secured contract from the merchant\n"
-"                   and asks for confirmation.  Taler does not\n"
-"                   require the customer to provide any identity\n"
-"                   information to the merchant.  Transaction\n"
-"                   histories and digitally signed contracts can be\n"
-"                   preserved in the wallet for future review by\n"
-"                   the customer, or even use in court."
+"The customer can use the wallet to <b>review</b> his\n"
+"                  balance. The wallet can contain different currencies,\n"
+"                  and may be shared across devices. Customers can make\n"
+"                  backups of the wallet to secure its contents against\n"
+"                  hardware failures."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: contact.html.j2:6
@@ -1285,3 +1266,6 @@ msgstr ""
 #~ msgid "Wallet"
 #~ msgstr ""
 
+#~ msgid "Taler as seen by customers"
+#~ msgstr ""
+