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-This tutorial is aimed at developers who want to learn how they can add HTTP serving 
+This tutorial is for developers who want to learn how they can add HTTP serving 
 capabilities to their applications with the @emph{GNU libmicrohttpd} library,
-abbreviated @emph{MHD}, and who do not know how to start. It tries to help these
-developers to implement common basic HTTP serving tasks by discussing executable
-sample programs implementing different features. 
+abbreviated @emph{MHD}.  The reader will learn how to
+implement basic HTTP functions from simple executable
+sample programs that implement various features.
 
 The text is supposed to be a supplement to the API reference manual of 
 @emph{GNU libmicrohttpd} and for that reason does not explain many of the parameters.
 Therefore, the reader should always consult the manual to find the exact meaning
-of the functions used in the tutorial. In the same sense, the tutorial seeks to
-encourage the use of the @emph{RFCs}, which document the conventions the Internet
-is built upon. 
+of the functions used in the tutorial.  Furthermore, the reader is 
+encouraged to study the relevant @emph{RFCs}, which document the HTTP standard.
 
-@emph{GNU libmicrohttpd} is assumed to be already installed and it has been
-written with respect to version @value{VERSION}. As the library is still in its 
-beta stages, later versions may show different behaviour. At the time being, 
+@emph{GNU libmicrohttpd} is assumed to be already installed.  This tutorial
+is written for version @value{VERSION}.  At the time being, 
 this tutorial has only been tested on @emph{GNU/Linux} machines even though
 efforts were made not to rely on anything that would prevent the samples from being
 built on similar systems.